考试知识点60 书面表达咨询信
高考考试频度：★★★☆☆
1. 写作办法
① 首段：
a. 复述题目场景，表明写作目的；
b. 遵守礼貌原则，只问有关信息；
c. 简要介绍自己，表明写作目的。
② 主体：
a. 询问具体问题，注意疑问句式；
b. 提供背景材料及询问缘由；
c. 强调所需信息的重要程度；
d. 题目需要的内容均应涉及。
③ 尾段：
a. 表明急切心情，提供联系方法；
b. 结尾彬彬有礼，表示诚挚谢意；
c. 期望得到他们的帮忙并合作。
2. 写作步骤图
说明写信目的 |
介绍背景 |
询问详细情况 |
表示谢意，期盼回复 |
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
我是……，暑期计划到贵校学习。
I am …and planning to study in your university this summer.
我是一名中国学生，想到贵校学习。我计划下个学期开始上课，假如你能告知一些必要的信息，我将不胜感激。
I am a Chinese student who wishes to study at your university. I will start my course from the next term, and I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information.
我写信是要询问……
I’m writing to ask if …
第二部分：介绍背景
套语：
我获得……高校的……学士学位。毕业后便开始在……工作。
I received a bachelor’s degree in…After graduation, I began working….
是我的朋友建议我写这封信的。他去年毕业于贵校，热情地向我推荐贵校。
I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who graduated from your university last year and has warmly recommended it to me.
我已经获得了生物学学士学位，并期望能在贵校继续学习。
I have had a bachelor’s degree in biology and wish to continue my study at your university.
第三部分：询问详细情况
套语：
你能向我介绍一下贵校的……状况吗？
Could you please tell me something about… of your college?
能否寄给我一份申请表及与申请有关的其他必要的材料？
Would you please send me an application form and other materials necessary for my application?
你能尽快告知这类信息并邮寄给我有关表格吗？很感谢！
Would you please send me all the information and the forms as soon as possible? Thank you very much.
假如你能告诉我那些必要的程序，我将不胜感激。
I would be much obliged to you if you tell me the necessary procedures.
第四部分：表示谢意，期盼回复
套语：
非常抱歉打扰你，对你的友善帮助不胜感激。
Sorry to bother you, your kind help would be greatly appreciated.
假如你能回复，我将感激不尽。
I will appreciate it very much if you can give me a reply.
3.写作模板
Dear ______ ,
①I am ______（自我介绍）. ②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______（要询问的内容）.
③First of all, what are ______（第一个问题）? ④Secondly, when will ______（第二个问题）? ⑤Thirdly, is ______（第三个问题）?
⑥I would also like to inquire ______（将非常重要的问题单独成段）. ⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?
⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
倘若你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关状况。（箭头所指内容）
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适合增加细节，以使行文流畅。
参考词语：住宿—accommodation
【思路点拨】
李华计划暑假期间去英国学英语为期六周，看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不了解，想要给校方写信咨询有关事情，考生要了解这是一封信，要符合信的格式。这是考生很熟知的一个应用文文体。考生应该注意动词时态的变化，以一般目前时为主，兼有以后时，譬如：功课什么时间开始?这是以后的事情。注意适合用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。用一些高级句型和词语来提升作文档次。
【范本赏析】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【闪光点说明】
短文用了一些短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：plan to do sth ;would like to do sth; pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ；Besides等，使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一。如：I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气，增加了文章的闪光点。
Writing 1（2019·广东佛山一中高中三年级月考）
假定你是育才中学的学生会主席李华，受美国亚特兰大ELCA高中 学生会主席Peter邀请，计划下个月带领10位学生会成员赴该校进行为期一周的交流，请你给他们写一封邮件咨询有关筹备工作。内容包含：
1. 感谢他们的邀请；
2. 询问有关事宜（最好到达时间、具体日程安排、需要携带的物品）;
3. 期盼尽快得到回话。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适合增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 2（2019·全国高中一年级课时训练）
假定你是李华，自从迷恋上手游和网路小说后你一直沉迷其中，你也非常想痛下决心摆脱所困，但意志一直不够坚强。某日交际英语课后，你给来自美国的你校外教Joe写了一封短信，想咨询一下美国初中生是怎么样处置学习与娱乐的关系的，并试图从中获得启发.
信的内容包含：
1.你的烦恼；
2.咨询美国同龄人对待手机和学习的状况；
3.期盼好的建议。
注意：
1.词数100左右；开头与结尾已给出，不包括在总词数中；
2.可适合增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 3（2019·浙江高考考试模拟）
假定你是李华，计划今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅游社写一封邮件进行咨询，内容如下:
1. 请其推荐适合的旅游路线；
2. 请其告知有关的旅游成本；
注意；
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适合增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
倘若你是星光中学高中二年级的李华，你计划高中毕业后到美国某大学念书，所以写了一封信给该校知道状况。内容包含：
1. 介绍我们的状况，比如现在的学业水平，喜好，专长，参加社会实践活动等；
2. 咨询到该所大学留学的条件，如：外语水平、所需学费，申请奖学金条件等；
3. 期望得到更多关于该校的资讯。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir/ madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 1
【范本】
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. Thank you so much for inviting us to have a one-week communication activity at your school and I am writing to enquire about further details.
I am planning to take 10 members of our Student Union to go to your school next month, hoping to make good use of this opportunity to communicate and learn from each other. So I’d like to know what the best date of our arrival is. Above all, could you possibly send me a specific daily schedule of the activity in advance so that I can prepare better for the trip? Last but not least, this being our first experience to go to America, would you be kind enough to offer some suggestions on what necessities we specially need to take with us?
We are really excited and looking forward to the activity. I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【范本】
Dear Joe,
I’ve been indulged in the phone games and internet novels and I don’t know how to deal with it. Thus I’m writing to ask you for some advice.
Trapped into a virtual world, I can barely concentrate on my study, which has caused bad marks for several times. Aware of the harm they have done to me, I have made an effort to avoid these evil things. However, I failed without firm determination. I just can’t tear myself away from my smart phone. Then it struck me that I’d like to turn to you for help after your class, I will appreciate it a lot if you could tell me how American students strike a balance between study and entertainment and offer me some suggestions. I guess different methods may make a big difference.
I’m longing for your advice and sorry to bother you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
【范本】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope t0 have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes? In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
Dear sir/ madam,
I am a Senior Two student in Xingguang High school in China. I will graduate from high school in one year. I plan to study in your university after graduation. Now, my academic performance is pretty good and I competed in Nation Olympic Math Contest for High school students last year and won the first place. I love sports, especially ball games and I am a member of school basketball team. Also, I am a volunteer in Protection The Great Wall.
If I attend your university, what kind of English level should I have? How much the fee should I pay? What qualification do I need to apply for a scholarship?
I am looking forward to receiving your reply and more information about your university.
Yours,
Li Hua
