写 作
书面表达(半)开放类
开放式书面表达:指给出极少的提示或近乎命题作文,这种题需要考生发挥想象把文章的内容合理地表达出来。也有些是给出漫画、一句话或一种情景,让考生依据我们的理解写作文,即给出漫画、主题或两三点提示,由考生去发挥、构思。
开放作文形同于书面表达,但又不等同于书面表达,由于书面表达总是给出较为详细的提示(文字提纲式、文字+图画式、或图表式),考生在组织短文时,完全可以把这类提示当作短文的提纲或线索;考生在表达时,仅需沿着这条线索思维即可,留给考生进行发散思维的空间不多。而"开放作文"是一种限制相对较少、留给考生更多自由发挥空间的、考查学生书面表达能力的一种新题型。这种题型只给出主题,也就是说只对你说正在或将要发生任何事情
,至于事情发生的过程、结果则完全由考生自己去发挥,考生的思维完全可以发散。所以,考生的思路不同,写出的作文就会是千人千面。
容易见到的开放式作文命题形式
标题式
标题式开放作文的命题形式总是是需要考生围绕一个特定的话题去写作。"标题式开放作文"事实上等于汉语的命题式作文,考生只须围绕题目中所给的特定的话题说明、叙述、举例,加上谈谈我们的感想或发表我们的怎么看就能了。
漫画式
漫画式开放作文以北京高考考试为代表。命题形式总是是需要考生围绕一幅漫画去写作。然而,相对于"标题式"开放作文而言,"漫画式"开放作文的写作困难程度更大。
常考文体
"开放作文"的常考文体有两种:记叙文和议论文。
"记叙式开放作文"一般给出一段材料,然后需要考生沿着材料的纵横进步方向,充分发挥想象力,拓展原材料内容;同时运用逻辑推理办法,进行谋篇布局;最后串词成句,连句成文。总结起来就是,"记叙式开放作文"需要考生灵活处置所给材料,做到综合剖析,辩证考虑,提炼看法,力求论点合理,论据充分,论证严密。
"议论式开放作文"则需要考生依据所提供的信息材料,在描述漫画信息之余,发挥我们的想象,展开简单的议论,并略谈我们的看法和怎么看。总结起来就是,"议论式开放作文"需要考生围绕所给漫画的信息,简要地进行描述,辩证考虑,提炼看法,力求论点合理,发人深思。值得注意的是:近年来,北京卷"开放作文"倾向于"就图论事"、"就图明理"。可以说,"议论式开放作文"与目前时尚的新课改、新课程、新课标很吻合,也与时尚的研究性学习、探究性学习很一致,既迎合了目前教学时尚,又对时尚有肯定的引领和推进用途。因此,考生应该注意练习自己围绕图片,总结写作要素的能力。另外,看图类文章的审题困难程度要略大于文字类文章的审题困难程度,所以考生在平常的练习中应该加大对解图能力的训
练。
第一步、描述漫画内容
描述漫画内容的基本条件是了解漫画。需要是:审图要准,定位要清;描述时言简意赅,不可越位;应该注意:不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意!由于开放作文不重视你的思想厚度,而重视你的语言水平。
第二步、讲解对漫画的理解
所谓对漫画的理解,是指围绕漫画反映的基本事实进行较为细致的讲解和我们的怎么看、感想或生活感悟等。需要是:逻辑明确,合情合理。
依据以上两个步骤,大家可以如此觉得:"开放作文"只须求你做两件事情,一件是描述图画(describe the following picture),另一件是讲解你对
图画讲解和怎么看(explain how you understand it)。相应地,你仅需写两个段落,一段是"描述段",另一段是"议论段"。
1."描述段"的写法:第一句可以用如下句式: In the picture, there is…等。 "描述段"的功能就是传达图画中的信息,向读者交代图画内容,所以必能用"there be"句型。另外,"描述段"的另一个功用即:为第二段的议论埋下伏笔。
2."议论段"的写法:"议论"段的首句有个固定的句式,即:In my opinion, the picture is meaningful and wonderful as well.等。怎么样发议论呢?所谓议论,就是依据图画信息,表达你的怎么看、感想。考生不必过深地挖掘图画信息,仅需用简单的英文,表达平易的道理。换句话说,只须你可以用正确的英文表达你的感想,便取得了胜利。
Writing 1
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信,请她助你修改所附材料的文字和格式。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适合增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【写作思路】
该题虽然也是文字提示,是信件体应用文写作,但它同往年的命题形式大不相同。写作要素没单独罗列出来,而是包括在题目需要中,这对考生审题和构思提出了较大的挑战,这是前所未有些革新。
经过认真审题,大家可以确定本文的写作要素有:
(1)简单介绍自己、讲解缘由;
(2)说明写信的目的——修改文字和格式;
(3)提示所附材料在哪儿;
(4)表示感谢。
考试试题的情景是考过生日常日常熟知的事情,题目需要明确、明确,开放性非常强,给考生留下了非常大的自主发挥的空间。
【参考范本】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点睛】
本文是一篇考生们熟知的信件类体裁的书面表达,内容贴近学生生活,所以每人有话可说。文章没给出开头和结尾,所以考生应该注意信件的格式,包含称呼语、正文与结束语等。在写作时应该注意先列出写作要素,而且应该注意以后时、目前时与目前完成时的交错用;注意用高级句式和多种结构的用法,而且语气要委婉、礼貌。
【名师点睛】
本文是一篇较为出色的范本。格式正确,要素全方位,语言通顺、流畅,非常不错地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的,然后具体讲述我们的困难,再提出请求,最后表达我们的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。除此之外,作者还用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience, 目前分词短语hoping you can give me some help, 宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的闪光点所在。
Writing 2
"Planning is good, but doing is better"是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。需要如下:
1. 简述你对这句名言的理解;
2. 用一个具体事例加以说明;
3. 给出适合的结尾。
注意:
1. 文章的标题已给出(不计词数);
2. 文中不能以任何形式透露区域、学校、老师或同学名字等真实信息,不然按作弊行为认定。
Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better
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【写作方法指导】
本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可看出主如果介绍将计划付诸推行的重要程度。围绕这个主旨去写,不可以跑题。提纲部分还需要三个方面:1. 简述你对这句名言的理解;2. 用一个具体事例加以说明;3. 给出适合的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后,还应该注意文章应用第一人称和一般目前时、一般过去时。写作时发挥我们的想象,灵活运用英语常识,使用不一样的表达方法将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁,同时应使用适合的连接词或过渡词,使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是不是有漏写状况、有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范本】
Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better
Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.
My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring TOPic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.
I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.
【名师点睛】
本篇范本短小精悍,结构合理,语言简洁,时态、人称准确,非常不错地完成了写作任务。在文章开头,作者紧扣题目,提源于己对plan的理解,同时引出下文,然后用我们的亲身历程表明要将计划付诸推行尤为重要。在文中,作者用到了短语in detail, bear no fruit, carry out, set out to等短语,防止了文章表达的单一。除此之外,还用到了宾语从句how we do和how I achieved my success, 与句型It came from good planning and better doing combined等,这类都给文章增加了闪光点。
Writing 3
在班级活动中,当你的想法与大部分同学不同时,你是坚持我们的看法并说服其他人,还是尊重大部分同学的建议?请你以"When I Have a Different Opinion"为题,用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。需要如下:
1. 从以上两种做法中选择一种;
2. 以具体事例讲解你选择的原因。
注意:短文中,不能以任何形式透露区域、学校、同学名字等真实信息。不然,按考试作弊行为认定。
When I Have a Different Opinion
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【写作方法指导】
本篇书面表达陈述看法及理由
写作时注意以下几个方面:
1. 仔细阅读有关提示,弄清考试试题提供的所有信息,明确从以上两种做法中选择一种,是坚持我们的看法并说服其他人还是遵从大部分同学的建议。
2. 提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行剖析、构思和想像。要依据提示情景或词汇,根据肯定逻辑关系来写。
3. 依据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般目前时态。但在以具体事例讲解的时候用过去时
4. 注意用高级词语和句式,以增加文章的闪光点。
【参考范本】
Possible version 1:
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.
once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.
Possible version 2:
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.
Writing 4
学校正在组织科技革新大赛,你想为日常某件物品设计添加新功能来参赛。请以"My Magic ________"为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意。
内容:
1. 说明设计理由;
2. 介绍新功能。
注意:
1. 词数不少于120个;
2. 不可以用真实名字和学校名字。
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【参考范本】
My Magic Shoes
As is known to us all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt. However, as a boy who has athlete’s foot, I am looking forward to inventing a pair of shoes helping my feet keep dry and me walk conveniently. Therefore, this new kind of shoes has come into being recently.
To keep the feet dry and comfortable, this new kind of shoes is equipped with a micro-fan. When you walk, a small machine changes the energy produced by walking into electric energy and stores it. If you sTOP walking, the micro-fan can work immediately to dry your feet. However, what amazes you most is the following new function. There is a special red button in each of the shoes. If the road you are walking is flat, you can press the red button, which helps your shoes change into a roller skate with two rollers appearing beneath your shoes, and you can reach your destination quickly. On arriving at your destination, press the red button again and the rollers will return to your shoes, so you can walk normally like others.
That’s my magic shoes. Do you like them or would you like to have a try?
Writing 5
请依据你对以下两幅图的理解,以"Actions Speak Louder than Words"为题,用英语写一篇作文。
参考词语: banner stump
你的作文应包含以下内容:
1.简要描述两幅图的内容;
2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解;
3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
注意:
1.可参照图片适合发挥;
2.作文词数150左右;
3.作文中不能提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Actions Speak Louder than Words
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【参考范本】
Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.
The message conveyed here is clear: "Actions speak louder than words." Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like sTOPping cutting down trees to better the environment.
Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, sTOPping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.
【写作方法指导】
此篇书面表达需要大家运用夹叙夹议的写作手法:第一段大家先对两幅图进行简单的描述;第二段对图片内容进行剖析;最后一段将剖析的结果运用到大家生活实质当中,此段是重点,应当多用一些笔墨。
Writing 1(2019届陕西重点高中高考考试模拟)
倘若你叫李华,你的美国笔友Tom对你近期的中国国学经典(Chinese classics)学习很有兴趣.他想请你介绍你近期学习课程的状况,请为他回信。内容包含:
1.非常高兴收到来信;
2.课程状况;
3.美好祝愿。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可适合增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词语:端午节the Dragon Boat Festival
Dear Tom,
I'm more than delighted to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese classics.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范本】
Dear Tom,
I'm more than delighted to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese classics. I would like to introduce my own experience about learning Chinese classics to you,which is likely to benefit you.
I take classes three times a week and each class lasts one hour. The professor has a good knowledge of Chinese classics and has a sense of humour so that all the students are absorbed in the classes. Now we know a lot about ancient literature,art,traditions and great ideas that are passed down by generation after generation. By learning it I am proud of our ancestors' wisdom and civilization they created.
In my opinion,If you want to know more about China,you ought to learn Chinese classics showing the soul and spirit of China. At the same time,I wish more people around the world like you are interested in Chinese classics and know more about China.
【点评】这是一篇开放式作文,大家需要用正确的英语把给出的要素表达出来。动笔前必须要认真剖析要素,理解要素要表达的意思,不可以遗漏要素,跑题偏题.所以大家应该做到以下几个方面:1、认真审题,明确表达要素。2、谋篇布局。3、遣词:依据要素及构思的提纲,大家可以初步确定文章中可可以用到的词语。4、造句:把文章的主旨了然于心,再加上词语的铺垫,下面造句,注意上下文的过度要自然,使文章愈加流畅,可读性强.
Writing (2019届广东东莞高中三年级二模)
假定你是学生会主席李华.你校将于2019年3月30日举办“大湾区与我”(The Greater Bay Area and Me)英文演讲比赛,以加大粤港澳姐妹学校间的交流与合作。11所高中共30位学生将参加全天比赛。请给外教史密斯先生写一封邮件,邀请他当评委并作点评。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适合增加细节,以使行文连贯.
【范本】
Dear Smith,
I am Li Hua,the president of the Students' Union. We will hold an English speech contest at our school on March 30 and I'd like to invite you to be its judge.
This contest is intended to strengthen ties and co-operation between sister schools in Guangzhou. Hong Kong and Macau. The theme is" The Greater Bay Area and Me",and a total of 30 students from different high schools will participate. Should you accept,you'd be expected to grade and provide some feedback on each student's presentation. I know the students would be very grateful for your participation.
If you could get back to me with your decision by the end of the week,it would be greatly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】
英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试。它不只考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力。在写作时应该注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提升英语写作水平,需要两方面的练习:一是语言基础方面的练习,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等常识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作常识和能力方面的练习以学会写作方面的基本办法和方法。
Writing 3(2019届山东青岛高中三年级一模)
倘若你是李明,你发现部分同学每次遇见考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题,并据此提出一些建议。
请依据下面的内容,完成表格。
Many students have some symptoms(症状)of anxiety(焦虑)before they take an exam every time. Some of them feel nervous,some will feel dizzy or tired,some will suffer from lack of sleep,and some will lose their appetite(胃口).As a matter of fact,all these symptoms have terrible effects on their exams and they are all eager to get rid of them.
How should they do then?
Please complete the following form
Worksheet
Some of them feel(2)nervous Symptoms of(1)__________ before taking the exam | Some will feel(2)__________ |
Some will feel(3)__________ or tired | |
Some will suffer from lack of(4)__________ | |
Some will(5)__________ their appetite |
【写作剖析】
本篇书面表达是开放类作文,依据提示信息倘若你是李明,你发现部分同学每次遇见要紧考试,都会出现一些焦虑症状.请你用英语写一封信,向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题,第一要先依据英文提示完成下面的表格,写作时注意以下几个方面:
1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清考试试题提供的所有信息,要素包含:
1.焦虑症状(symptoms of anxiety):头晕、疲惫、睡眠不好、没食欲等。
2.建议:a.对考试有一个好的态度,考试前拟定好适合的复习计划:b.考试期间确保有足够的睡眠,不要熬夜;c.睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等能够帮助睡眠。
2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行剖析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词汇,根据肯定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以根据要素所给的顺序写。
3、依据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。
4、注意用高级词语和句式,以增加文章的闪光点。
【闪光点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且用了多种表达:
only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.(高分句型一)句中用了only+状语,句子用半倒装结构
只有如此,才能防止考试的重压。
Third,we can try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed,which might help us to have a sound sleep.(高分句型二)句中which might help us to have a sound sleep为非限制性定语从句
第三,大家可以在睡前洗个热水澡或喝一杯温牛奶,如此可以帮助大家睡个好觉.
【范本】
Dear editor.
I am Li Ming of Senior Three,Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired,some will suffer from lack of sleep. So I want to give some advice about it.
First,in my opinion,it's important for us to have a good attitude to exams. We should study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Second,during the period of exams,make sure that we have enough sleep. we should not stay up too late. Third,we can try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to be d,which might help us to have a sound sleep.
I hope these advice above can help us achieve high grades during the exams.
Best wishes
Li Ming
Writing 4(2019届河南开封高考考试模拟)
倘若你是李华,是一名高中生。近几年来,伴随环保意识的增强,各地相继颁布禁止在新年期间燃放鞭炮的决定。请你进一步讲解说明禁放鞭炮对的益处,号召大家不断提升自我意识,贡献我们的一份力量。
注意:
1.字数100左右;
2.可适合增加细节,使行文连贯.
3.参考词语;鞭炮firecrackers
【范本】
I am Li Hua who is from a senior school. In recent years I have realized a growing number of people have become aware of protecting the environment. For example,the ban that fireworks are forbidden to set off during the Spring Festival has been announced in many areas in China. I think it is necessary to take measures to improve the quality of air.
Every year it is because of setting off fireworks that fires take place frequently which makes people injured and even causes deaths. In addition,setting off fireworks not only wastes money but pollutes air which does harm to people's health. Now that setting off fireworks can't benefit us why not give it up?
In order to live a happy life let us go against setting off fireworks hand in hand and give ourselves a beautiful home.
Writing5
进入高中三年级以来,同学们倍感学习重压,有些同学熬夜学习,甚至课间十分钟也不放过。假设你是李华,请针对这一现象,在penpal world.com网站上用英语发表一下我们的怎么看,与外国初中生进行交流。
注意:1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适合增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Hi Fellows,
I’m Li Hua, a senior high student from China. I’d like to share something with you. Since the beginning of senior high, the learning burden makes us students feel more stressed. Many of us often sit up late at night fighting for the College Entrance Exam; even a ten-minute break won’t be let go.
As far as I know, lack of sleep does great harm to our health. For one thing, we can’t concentrate in class if we don’t get enough sleep. For another, we may get angry and impatient easily. By the same token, a ten-minute break is definitely necessary, which can help us get rid of tiredness and focus on next class period. A famous proverb goes well, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy". How about your situation and opinion?
Looking forward to your reply.
Writing 1
怎么样理解"合作",不一样的人有不一样的怎么看。请认真阅读下面的引语,按需要用英语写一篇短文。
"United we stand, divided we fall."
内容需要:
1.你对该引语的理解;
2.你的有关历程;
3.你所得出的结论。
注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不可以出现考生的具体信息;
3.词数100左右。
This quotation tells us that______________________________________________________________
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【参考范本】
This quotation tells us that unity is strength. Whenever we are faced with difficulties, cooperation plays a significant role in getting us out of trouble.
There was a time when I was so skilled in playing basketball that I became so proud. However, after we lost a game due to the fact that I overlooked my partners and refused to cooperate with them, my coach made me realize the importance of cooperation. Later on, not only did I cooperate with others in the game but also I learned to help others and turned to them for help. Surely cooperation made a big difference and helped our team make many achievements.
From this experience I learn that only if we attach much importance to cooperation can we win.
【写作方法指导】本篇书面表达为提纲类开放式作文。"合作"这一话题很贴合考生生活实质,让考生有东西可以写,符合高考考试的命题趋势。考生写作之前需要认真审题,本题写作需要包括三部分内容:第一简述对该引语的理解,即提炼主题——合作的重要程度。然后讲述一段我们的历程,说明这一主题。最后得出结论——重申合作的重要程度。注意描述具体事例时要用过去时态,人称用第一人称,内容要紧紧围绕"合作"这一主题,最后要有总结,形成首尾呼应。
写作素材
1.面临, 面对be faced with
2.在某方面起着要紧有哪些用途play a significant role in...
3.过去有一段时间…… There was a time when...
4.向某人求助turn to sb. for help
5.与某人相处得好get along well with sb.
6.有重大影响make a big difference
7.获得成绩make achievements
8.觉得……十分要紧attach much importance to...
▶文章分三段来写,首段提炼出unity is strength 这一主题;第二段围绕"团结就是力量"讲述了一件发生在自己身上的事情;尾段第三强调团结的重要程度。团结这一主线贯穿文章始末,主题鲜明,语言流畅。
Writing 2
你校英文报纸开辟了一个专栏:Experience。本期话题是怎么样面对失败。请你写一篇英语短文,谈谈我们的怎么看。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文中不可以出现与本人有关的信息。
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【参考范本】
As high school students, we have to admit that failure is part of our life. Difficulties can arise now and then, which may cause us repeated failure. And it’s impossible for us to get rid of them completely. But we can develop the right attitude towards failure.
When faced with failure, I never feel upset, blame others or complain about the environment. Instead, I remain optimistic and regard every failure as an opportunity to learn. If we can draw a lesson from each failure, we’ll be on the right way to success. Therefore, in the face of failure, take your courage. What’s more, if necessary, turn to your classmates and teachers for help.
【写作方法指导】
这是一篇开放式作文,给出了写作话题——怎么样面对失败,让考生在此基础上用英语表达我们的看法,给读者传递一种正能量。写作时,从"怎么样面对失败"这一话题入手,结合亲身历程谈论失败是不可防止的,正确地面对失败要做到有积极的态度并且要从失败中汲取教训。人称为第一人称,时态以一般目前时为主。
写作素材
1.防止犯了错误误 avoid making mistakes
2.摆脱失败get rid of failure 3.维持乐观remain optimistic
4.面对失败 in the face of failure
5.鼓起勇气take courage
6.向某人求助turn to sb. for help
7.永不言败 never say die
8.不出差错难成功。He who makes no mistakes makes nothing.
9.不历程风雨,如何见彩虹。No cross, no crown.
Writing 3
请依据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。
We all know that "sticks and stones may break our bones", but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.
注意:
1.无须写标题,不能照抄英语提示语;
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3.文中不能透露个人名字和学校名字;
4.词数100左右。
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【参考范本】
My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.
One day, when we learned the new word "eccentric" in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying "My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him."Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My words must have hurt him deeply.
Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. We should avoid hurting others when we speak.
Writing 4
近年来,名校遭到愈加多的父母和学生的推崇。请你结合这个现象写一篇英语短文,剖析出现
"名校热"是什么原因,并针对这个现象谈谈你的怎么看。
注意:词数100左右。
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【参考范本】
In recent years, more and more parents want to send their children to famous schools because they think it can ensure that their children go to famous universities.
It is true that famous schools are equipped with better teaching facilities. However, not every student is fit for famous schools where there is fierce competition among students. And students there have to work much harder than students in other schools.
I hope the government will take effective measures to make sure all the schools provide equally good education. In this way, all the students have equal right to highquality education.
Writing 5
为响应“中国梦——我的梦”,彰显高中生的青春与活力,最近JGEXB发布了一则征文,体裁为演讲稿。征文题目为“I believe I can”。
注意:
1. 词数:100左右;
2.格式已给出;
3. 可适合增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
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【参考范本】
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
Please answer me a question, “Have you ever seen such a scene as the following?” In the morning, when you wake up, open your eyes slowly, look around, you can notice that the light comes into your room and smell the fresh air, you can hear the sweet nature voice outside the windows.
Yes, yes, yes, what a beautiful day, what a different day, and what a bright day! And most importantly, it is a new journey of your life, a new beginning to make new decisions, take new actions, make new friends, and take your life to a totally new world!
In your eyes, you can see clearly the things you want to have, the paces you intend to go, the relationship you desire to develop, and the positions you aspire to reach. You are the only one; I am the only one, too. We are all special and different. Life will be senseless if there is no person.
I am myself, so I believe I can! I know every dream will come true if I'm passionate, confident and hard-working! I will live every day of my life with absolute passion, and now I am showing my passion with words and the actions. I will focus all my time and effort on the most important goals of my life. I will accept challenges of hardship. I will never waver in my pursuit of excellence.
In a word, I believe I am the best one, I can do it and I will realize my dream!
I must do it! I can do it! I will do it! I will succeed! I believe I can.
That's all, thank you!